Thoughts? is this one too dark o.O "When Evil Becomes Vile"

You tried to help me out with various deeds

You didnt think that I would be able to tell good from evil

You thought wrong

You are in fact more vile than anything I have ever seen.

You speak with fire

and have vile thoughts proccessing thoughout your brain

You were the one who poisoned my mind

Brought me into many boughts of depression that went deeper than the depths of hell

So many times did I plead with you,

I plead for boughts of happiness, but you didn't listen

So today is the day that I finally burn you

Take the shotgun to your mind

Change the way that you see me, for better or for worse

If you dont like it, then I shall splatter your mind all over you

Cause you to go insane, as you did me

And i shall watch you suffer

See you suffer with a fate worse than what you dealt me

And I shall let you suffer

And send you to a tomb...

What you did to me is something that cannot be forgiven

I will never be scorned again, and used as a ploy for your evil games

I take the knife to your throat now

look and see how it shines?

you wont feel a thing

the reaper shall take you quick

and you shall burn

for all of eternity